Crit Notes #2

I got helpful feed back that made me be aware of what I was doing and how I was going to present it in the show. The helped me with color choices and what flowers could add a little more shading. I found it very helpful.

Tues April 12, 2011

          Today in class we were able to critique people as well as receive critique. We went down the line of every ones work. When we reached mine people were able to tell me what they thought would be good to see in the painting and what they like and how i can improve it.

• shading
• 2nd coat of paint
• leave the background white

          It was nice to hear an outside voice and input on what they would like to see. It was not just one persons prospective but rather a group of people collaborating and discussing what they would like to see if this painting was up.