The feedback i got from people was very helpful and i can understand what they were trying to say. I got contructive comments like claify weather we scored or they scored; the ball could have been a bit smaller. I recieved some really nice feedback like you did really well with all the anthropromorphic, geometric and organic shapes; the grass looks really good; good job with the proportion and making it in perspective. Also a lot of people understood my story and what was going on which made me feel that i utilized my paper and material well. What i believe i could have changed was making the people more in proportion to the goal and put a little more detail in it. Like having people on the sides cheering and me having faced the other way with my arms in the air!
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